
Who Goes There?
Of the writers to get their start before John W. Campbell took over Astounding in late 1937, Ross Rocklynne was one of the few who adjusted well to the new regime. It could be because he and Campbell were close contemporaries, as well as Rocklynne being an early practitioner of what we now call “hard” SF. He made his debut in 1935 and had become an established writer by the time he attended the first ever Worldcon in 1939. He never gained the popularity of other contemporaries like Isaac Asimov or Robert Heinlein, or even Campbell under his Don A. Stuart pseudonym, perhaps because he only ever wrote two novels, neither of which has ever appeared in book form. Rocklynne went MIA for much of the ’50s and ’60s; the SF Encyclopedia entry on him says this was because of Dianetics (a sadly common occurrence with SF authors at the time), but it doesn’t mention he also stepped away from writing because of chronic pain in his face and jaw. When he returned to writing in the late ’60s his work was surprisingly well-received, and he even appeared in Again, Dangerous Visions with a new story, alongside the New Wave writers.
“Intruders from the Stars” marked a rare Rocklynne appearance in Amazing Stories, since he was much more in favor of Astounding. I only heard about it because it had gotten a Retro Hugo nomination for Best Novella. The pickings must’ve been slim, because unfortunately it’s not very good. In fairness, 1944 is typically considered a lull year for the field, largely on account of the war. If authors didn’t enlist or weren’t drafted, some (like Asimov and Heinlein) worked busy jobs as civilians in support of the war effort. It wasn’t all bad: it was during those few years when Henry Kuttner and C. L. Moore, often writing together, emerged as an intimidatingly strong creative duo. Clifford Simak also began the series of stories that would later form his “novel” City. Still, there were fewer authors active between 1943 and 1945 than usual.
Placing Coordinates
First published in the January 1944 issue of Amazing Stories. It remained stranded for three decades before being reprinted in the November 1973 issue of Science Fiction Adventures Classics.
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It’s the last battle between an empire on its last legs and a more democratic faction. The empress of this civilization, a beautiful woman named Bess-Istra, faces death in battle, retreat from the planet, or a compromise with the leader of the enemy faction, a prime minister who wants Bess-Istra as his wife. Bess-Istra isn’t keen on this. For reasons that are never given, except maybe the implication that she’s really just that attractive, Bess-Istra passively draws in nearly every male character who crosses her path. Every man seems to feel intense love or hatred for her—sometimes both at the same time. Take Bandro, Bess-Istra’s right-hand man, who is loyal to her at the beginning, only for her to beat him and chew him out for suggesting she take the compromise, “his love for this girl at that moment turning into hate.” Said hate will fester over the course of the story, but we’re getting a bit ahead of ourselves. Then there’s the totally amoral scientist Sah-Hallo, who stays loyal to Bess-Istra, if only because he seems to be the only man around to not feel strongly about her, being rather preoccupied with his “toys.” The fallen empress and her thousand trops hop in their massive cylindrical escape ship and mark coordinates for a neighboring planet fit for colonization. Or maybe not. Given how small Bess-Istra’s army really is and the fact that they don’t know much of anything about who may be living on said planet, there’s a very real chance whoever’s there might see them coming. Which is what happens. The folks on this other planet, who seem pretty advanced, nudge the ship off course so it misses the planet, instead heading for a planet you and I would be familiar with.
We then jump forward in both time and space to Earth, specifically Mozambique in 1944. We have our token American character in the form of Bill van Astor-Smythe (what a name), a war correspondent who for some reason has been hanging out in the jungle. These Japanese have invaded the island of Madagascar and look to make headway in Mozambique, which is… also very strange. Okay, time to take a step back. “Intruders from the Stars” explicitly takes place in 1944, but it’s not our 1944. This issue of Amazing Stories would’ve appeared on newsstands in December 1943. Rocklynne could’ve written this story as far back as late 1942, when the frontlines of World War II in both theaters looked quite different. There was still fighting in North Africa, Mussolini was still in full control in Italy, and the tide had just turned in favor of the Americans in the Pacific. It’s possible Rocklynne wrote this story during the Guadalcanal campaign. It still doesn’t excuse some conspicuous inaccuracies, like the fact that Bill and other characters act as if Midway hadn’t happened. The Japanese are a lot better fortified in-story than they were in real life, especially by the time of the story’s publication. The European theater is also described repeatedly as being bad for the Allies, which simply wasn’t the case, even by the middle of 1943. You have to wonder how people in those days got their news, or rather when they got their news. Obviously you’d read newspapers, listen to the radio, watch newsreels at the movie theater, but information could be wrong or misleading, not to mention there was a time delay. The unfortunate thing is that “Intruders from the Stars” would’ve read as dated on the very day it appeared on newsstands.
In case you haven’t guessed, this is very much a wartime story, and in part it functions as wartime propaganda, complete with racism against the Japanese and the liberal usage of a certain slur. There’s racism elsewhere, like referring to Chinese laborers as “coolies,” a slur so outdated that your grandpa might not even know what it means. To an extent at least, the racism is a byproduct of the circumstances in which Rocklynne wrote his story. Looking at World War II propaganda, namely anti-Japanese propaganda, between movies, cartoons, comic strips, etc., we see that things could be a lot worse than in Rocklynne’s story. The Japanese empire is antagonistic force, but the much bigger problem is Bess-Istra’s ship, which has crash-landed in the jungle. Bill meets a young missionary named John (or Johnny, as Bill keeps calling him) Stevens and his assistant Thomas Reynolds. The three men find that the locals have been drawn to the empress and begun treating her as an idol, which is bad for Stevens’s business. Bess-Istra and her cronies have been in cold sleep, possibly for centuries, but now awaken to a world which is decidedly not the one they were aiming for. Well, ya know, when you’re given lemons you should try making some lemonade. It’s convenient that not only is Earth totally habitable for Bess-Istra and her kind, and not only are these aliens totally humanoid in appearance, and not only are they able to understand human language thanks to a fancy alien doohickey, but also they’re able to catch up quickly on what’s been going on in the world. This is all rather hard to stomach and unscientific by Rocklynne’s standards—not that he was the strictest of writers.
Both Bill and Stevens are immensely attracted to Bess-Istra, much to Stevens’s angst, on account of his religious duties. Sex, or rather sexual attraction, plays a big role here, such that Bess-Istra’s obvious plan to become ruler of Earth wouldn’t get far without it. For his part, Bill is no fool, and from the day they meet he knows Bess-Istra and her gang are up to no good. The problem is twofold: a) he finds himself drawn to her, almost against his will, and b) he thinks, or tries to convince himself, that maybe there’s the chance the empress really does mean well when she says she can end this war with minimal casualties. It’s a very tempting proposal, and it turns out that what the aliens lack in numbers they more than make up for in equipment. Bess-Istra also seems to be taking an interest in Christianity (it’s vahue as to what sect, but I have to assume Catholicism), listening patiently while Stevens yaps at her about it. The Christian God is quite different from the goddess on Bess-Istra’s world, who demanded blood sacrifices. Having lived some of her life as a slave, Bess-Istra knows a thing or two about pain and torture. What ensues is—honestly sort of hard to describe. The aliens incapacitate Japanese and German soldiers, with the Allies and resistance (it’s nice, at least, that we get mentions of Chinese and other non-white resistance forces) groups making major headway almost literally overnight. Hitler (for some reason his first name is spelled “Adolph” in-story) and other Axis higher-ups are captured with ease.
Before you know it the war has ended, which is good for humanity, but then the question is… What next? It’s obvious what Bess-Istra wants, but the real question is whether anything can be done about it. How can Bill, who has (against his better judgment) befriended the empress in a sense, hope to save the world from her clutches?
There Be Spoilers Here
The answer is a mix of religion and some tough love—by that, I mean what is admittedly a well-earned slap, coming from Bill. I will say that while the love triangle angle is unearned, it’s interesting that not only does Bess-Istra’s interest in Christianity turn out to be genuine, but this happens because she falls in love with Stevens. Not that they can even get their relationship started, for a few reasons. In a bit of a twist it isn’t Bess-Istra who is ultimately the villain, but her spurned right-hand man Bandro. Whereas the plan to capture the Axis leaders and hold them on trial for war crimes was genuine, Bandro has a much more violent idea, killing soldiers and civilians indiscriminately. Berlin and Tokyo are utterly destroyed, which disturbs Stevens and even Bess-Istra; and yet, in the story’s most baffling moment, Bill begs to differ. He says:
The people of Japan and Germany are hopelessly warped. The Japanese believe themselves to be the divine flower of the world, and worship their emperor as a god in his own right. They believe it is a privilege for ‘inferior’ races to be ruled by them. The same goes for the Germans. They literally believe themselves to be the chosen people. That belief has been drilled into them for long, long years.
Nothing, only death, can completely erase the utter cruelty that has been bred into the very minds of those people! The utter conceit and treachery. The utter inhumanness.
Up to this point, Bill’s been a pragmatist and not one given to combat, which makes his sudden genocidal lunacy all the more head-turning. No doubt this was a sentiment some people really had, not helped by the death camps discovered at the war’s end (Rocklynne and others would not have known the full extent of Nazi and Japanese crimes at this point), but it makes little sense to come from this character. The good news is that Bess-Istra has by this point turned a new leaf and tells Bill to shut the fuck up. Ultimately the story rejects the notion of so-called collective punishment, even against the omnicidal horror of Germany under Nazism. Ultimately everything works, except for Stevens, who dies heroically. The implication is that with Stevens dead Bill might be able to make moves on the (former) empress, but we never get a clear answer as to how Bess-Istra feels about the Yankee journalist. As soon as the action ends, the story’s over.
A Step Farther Out
This is, if anything, indicative of both wartime SF and adventure SF of the sort that didn’t appear often in Astounding. There were other outlets for such pulp, including Planet Stories and Startling Stories, and even then Amazing Stories played second fiddle to those at the time. The magazine’s readership was waning, and this was a time when there were also paper shortages. It’s impressive, really, that Amazing Stories survived the war. “Intruders from the Stars” is not something I can honestly recommend, but it does serve as a kind of time capsule for a particular brand of SF writing that died off when the war ended. Rocklynne was a consummate professional, and while he wrote better than this, he also wrote worse.
See you next time.








